(Post 49) Rough cut

My opinions on my Rough Cut:

Overall, I thought my rough cut was okay. The editing was good when it worked, but there are

certain parts where the editing didn't work, and looked bad.

Also, a few of the shots (particularly the beginning and the end), were really slow and ineffective.

Because of this, I am going to insert more clips at certain points, to make it more interesting.

To do this, I need to film some more, but this shouldn't be too taxing.